Here's my RJ for the day!!! Some of you might thinks that I won't be posting my RJ on the blog again, you guys were right but it was just a tempory time only. Here I am again, posting my RJ on the blog, I would say that IF YOU DARE TO COPY MY RJ, DON'T BE A DUMBASS WHO COPIED EVERYTHING AND DON'T FORGETS THAT YOUR FACI ISN'T AN IDIOT WHERE YOU COULD FOOL THEM BY COPYING OTHER'S PEOPLE RJ!!!

Choose one of the stories presented in class. Create your own version.

One of the stories that I would choose in the class to be create as my own version would be “The Crane Maiden” because it was the most touching stories ones could ever listen to and will memorize the morale of the story and how the story touch our heart. How did this story touch our heart was the part the crane maiden uses her own feather to weave into cloth so that the poor old woodcutter couple will have money to spend for the Spring’s Festival. In the ending, how the crane maiden’s identity being exposed to the crowd and she have to leave the poor old couple to survive on their own and no one will help them in the future if they ran out of money. The morale of the story would be you help a person or an animal out of danger; the person will repay your kindness back. You should always listen to what one person say and don’t disobey their promise or break the promise.

I would create my own version by maintaining the original of the story but I change the ending of the story because the ending of the story was sad and heart breaking. By changing the ending of the story, it would give the audience a chance to read on and see how the story progress is. I know that it won’t sound like my own version but I think that if I want to create my own version it would be weird because the crane maiden story is much more suited in the ancient period time and if I would change it to modern time, it would be a big different in the sense of the story goes by and how it would touch a person. It is because creating another version of my own in the ending part would be better because I don’t want to create another version of the story as it won’t be original anymore. And I don’t want to confuse the people who are interested in the story and they have to read different version of the story just to know what the story is about. It would confuse the audience. Its better maintain original than change the story.

My ending of the story would be the old wife manages to grabs his husband away from the door of the back room where the crane maiden was doing her weaving. As she asked them not to disturb her or peek at her when she’s doing her weaving. After pulling the husband and neighbors away from the back room, she scolded them and asks them to leave her house. The neighbors were reluctant to leave her house but after listen to her reasoning, they went back to their home. So whenever the crane maiden went into the back room to do the weaving, the old wife will ask her to lock the door and this been going on for years till the old couple died. Then the crane lady return back to her celestial home because she have return the kindness of the old couple for taking care of her and the old man helping her out of the hunter’s trap.